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Unite together

发布时间:2017-12-20

  last time we had watched a movie about a team of basketball. from the movie i have learnt a lot, for example, we need someone give us some encouragement, when we come into the failure; but the more importmant is that the teammates need to unite together, when they face the troubles.

  in the last match, when their teacher wasn’t there. the players can’t unite together, so that they can’t win the match. but when the teacher came, the captian of the team said that they can unite together again. and at last, they have won the match.

  nowadays ,all of us enter the same class, and we have the same dream. so we must unite together like the team of the basketball. in this way that we can go into the university in the next year.

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  这是一篇电影观后感,文章结合自己的学习实际,总结出应当团结一致unite together,为了共同的目标,立意深远,语言表达到位。希望纠正个别错误,以求完美。

  1.                        a team of basketball应为:a basketball team ;the team of the basketball也应为:the basketball team .

  2.                        注意时态的用法:last time we had watched a movie,应为一般过去时。

  3.                        the players can’t unite together, so that they can’t win the match.同上can’t 应为:couldn’t

  4.                        and at last, they have won the match.同上,去掉have

  5.            in this way that we can go into the university in the next year. 此句应为:in this way we can go into the university next year.

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