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英语求职信的细节

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英语求职信的细节

  一、求职信的第一段说明写信的目的,有些专家认为不宜用分词句子,比如用下面的句子做开头,因为这样的句子被人用得大多,显得陈腐,失去特点。

  replying to your advertisement...

  answering your advertisement...

  believing that there is an opportunity...

  thinking that there is a vacancy in your company...

  having read your ad...

  再比较下面三组例句。每一组里面(1)句较差,经过修改后(2)句显得比较恰当。

  a:

  (1) replying to your recent advertisement in the boston evening globe, i wish to apply for the position of sales manager.

  (2) i am applying for the position of sales manager. i believe my qualifications will meet your exacting requirements.

  b:

  (1) i believe after reading your advertisement in this morning‘s journal that you are offering just the opportunity i am looking for.

  (2) your advertisement in this morning‘s journal for an adjustment manager prompted me to apply for this position.

  c:

  (1) having read your advertisement in the new york times for an accountant, i thought you might be interested in my application.

  (2) in your advertisement for an accountant, you indicated that you require the services of a competent person, with thorough training in the field of cost accounting. please consider me an applicant for the position. here are my reasons for believing i am qualified for this work.

  二、在提到希望得到的待遇时,可用类似的句子

  i‘d prefer not to set a salary, but since you ask, i consider 6,500 a month to be satisfactory.

  it‘s hard for me to say what my salary should be set at, but if pressed i would have to ask for a month as an initial salary.

  i don‘t feel that i should set my own salary, as i am happy enough to have the privilege of working for you. however, i would consider a month satisfactory compensation for my apprenticeship.

  三、提起或要求待遇时不要过分谦虚或表示歉意,下列句子不宜使用

  as for salary, i do not know what to say. would $4,500 a month be too much?

  do you think i would be asking too much if i said 5,000 dollars a month?

  you know what my services are worth better than i do. all i want is a living wage.

  四、关于求职信的结尾用语,下面也有三组例句。每一组里面(1)句较差,经过修改后(2)句显得比较恰当。

  a:

  (1)软弱、羞怯的:if you think i can fill the position after you have read my letter, i shall be glad to talk with you.

  (2)改写后(较佳):if my qualifications meet your standards, i would be happy to speak with you in person.

  b:

  (1)怀疑,不妥、不安全的:if you are interested, please let me know immediately, as i‘m sure an interview will convince you i‘m the man for the job.

  (2)改写后:i would like to request an interview. you can reach me by telephone at beijing 123456 between the hours of 7-9 a.m. and 5:30-9:30p.m. any evening.

  c:

  (1)哀求式的句子,不够完整(漏掉面谈时间):i would appreciate the opportunity for an interview. i can be reached by calling beijing 12345678.

  (2)改写后:may i have the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you? my telephone number is beijing 12345678. you can reach me between nine and five o‘clock during the day.

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